I read Natasha’s
blog post on “13 little envelopes” and I loved it. She gives a wonderful
summery at the beginning of the post that shares a bit of her opinion but is
also very informative and really sells the book. Although I have not read the
book, reading her post, has interested me and made me want to read it in the
future.
I found it very
interesting how she wove craft and opinion together. Throughout her
post, she expresses her opinions and then explains her thoughts through quotes
and elaboration. This in my opinion, makes the post more personal to her and her
ideas. She also explained what she thought what was done well and what could
have been done better and made it clear why she thought so.
Out of all of
Natasha’s blog posts that I have read, I think that this one really stands out.
I think this because she really shares her opinions, which makes the post more
relatable and engaging. I think she also discusses and includes the plot of the
story in a way that helps the reader understand what she is talking about even
if they haven’t read the book. By doing this, she helps the reader connect and
understand what is being said.
I really like how
this post is written because she stayed on track in all her paragraphs and
didn’t stray from her main ideas. I also
like how she connected all of her paragraphs to each other, by doing this, she
made her post more organized and well structured. I think her post is extremely
engaging and interesting because she informs you about the book it self and its
plot as well as her feelings and impressions toward it. In the future, I hope
to try to connect my opinions to the book more clearly and obviously like what
is done in this post.
This is so sweet, thank you Chlo!!
ReplyDeleteChloe, in this blog post you did a great job of summing up the essence of Natasha's blog. When I saw that you read this, I went and read it. I agree with you about how well Natasha did on explaining her opinion. You also give a bit of feedback for Natasha, in a non-negative way, which is very thoughtful. Your paragraphs are really strong and supported well with details from Natasha's post.
ReplyDeleteGreat job, Chloe!
I haven't read 13 little envelopes or Natasha's blog post, but I don't feel like I have read anything. You have a good core, but I feel that you need more substance. You explain what she does, but not with examples. This is a good base, but I fell that to make it better, you should use some examples and be more specific.
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